the present

 hey bloggers  this is my writing this week i wrote about a animation i saw last year and my class has been writing about it to enjoy.

I'm playing my xbox360 as i'm ready to scope someone in call of duty, my mom comes barging thru the door, i sigh and mumble to myself oh great. She tells me she is home like I'm an idiot. She plops a box onto the table and says open it. I open it excitedly, I stare and yell yuuuuuuuuus. A puppy But then I noticed three legs. I chucked the dog on the floor. Ps (plus) I quickly named the dog before I knew it had three legs! I called him chop hey and don't laugh either anyways let's get back to the story, let's get to chop’s point of view ahem chop here anyway let’s go. As he chuck’s me I flip on my back and look at a red ball that was in the dark box with me but must have rolled out. I try to grab it and bump into a cabinet and give it to the boy jimmie.

And he kicks it and I sprint to it and roll over in the box but isdc (i still don't care) i crab the ball and bring it to him. He laughs and grabs some crutches. I'm surprised we went outside and played at the end. 

and here is my planing.

Sentence 1

(character/scene)

One summer morning there was a boy immuned to his game. 

Sentence 2

(character/scene)

His mom comes home with a box.

Sentence 3

(Conflict)

The boy opens the box and is amazed to see a puppy but notices that it only has three legs.

Sentence 4

(Conflict)

He kicks the dog away and grunts 

Sentence 5

(resolution)

The boy starts to laugh at the dog with a good feeling.

Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

The boy plays outside with the puppy telling his mom they'll be outside